Need help with sequel and Abi pics!

From: DJ CLAWSON <XXRJ13C_at_prodigy.com>
Date: Fri, 29 Mar 1996 16:16:54 EST

Hi guys,
I NEED ABI PICKS! (I'm talking about Dr. Sinian). IF ANYONE CAN
GET THEY'RE TV SCREENS SCANNED IT WOULD BE VERY MUCH
APPRECIATED!
  The story is I've been drawing pretty much ALL the characters from
"Children of the Stone" except her, and it's getting a bit
frustrating.

Moving on,
   As pretty much all of you must know by now, "Children of the
Stone"
is up on the rat site. I'm currently working on the sequel, and as
far as
the plot goes I've got it down all right.
   I need your reactions to the original. I made a lot of character
development
changes in "Children . . ." and I want to know if anyone agrees with
them
and what they'd like to see more of. Especially the Pastmaster--I
realized
when "Children" was all ready sent that his character wasn't written
in to
do much, and I'm doing my best to change that and at least make him a
bit
more evil in the sequel. Did anyone notice? Does anyone care? Also,
I'm
working real hard on building the Abi/Jake and Chance/Felina
relationships,
but I'm trying to take it slow so I won't overwhelm th reader by
throwing all
this romance they've never seen before in their face.
   Any comments, critizims, or QUESTIONS would be appreciated. I
realize
the history and flashback stuff was probably confusing, but I DID
make it
so it lines up right with "The Bride of the Pastmaster" episode. I
realize there
were probably a few holes or things I didn't bother to explain in the
plot, so
TELL ME PLEASE and I'll make sure it's covered or changed in the
sequel.

Thanks a lot! Please send ANY comments!

                                              Dr. Jake

PS. I think I may have access to a scanner very shortly (in the next
few weeks).
If I can I will send rat some pics I drew: Felina as a gargoyle
                                                          Chance/T-
Bone as a gargoyle
                                                          Jake with
his sword of Ecuador
                                                          Thoran
                                                          Chip and
Jumicus.



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