Re: Unmasked 2 and ... romance?

From: DJ Clawson <djclawson_at_garden.net>
Date: Wed, 15 May 1996 19:32:34 -0400

A>
>Well chance, this could be an idea for the sequel of SwatKats Unmasked.
Steel(e) still upset from 'SwatKats Unmasked' decided to make full
investigation on the guys. Collecting every piece of evidence that he could
find that lead to the guys being the SwatKats, searching the junkyard for
evidence, spying on the guys, make a journal of every SwatKats activity, etc.

   Naaaahh . . . Steele's a pain in the butt. He got his just desserts.
Leave him be. Get a NEW detective, maybe a female one, one less annoying.

>
>>As for the Jake and Chance as kids
>>story I wrote for English class, I rewrote it this weekend, and sadly, I
>>cannot send it to the list. First of all, it has next to nothing to do with
>>the show aside from the fact it IS backstory (no mention of enforcers or
>>anything).
>
>Well, send it, I don't care if it's a back story. It got Jake and Chance,
isn't?

   The main reason I can't sent it to the Maxie site is I actually want it
going as a simple short story to somewhere else (like a magazine or something).

>BTW DJ, you will divided it in section, wouldn't you? Since that I have a
hard time reading "Children of the Stone".

   Divide what into sections? "Vilthuril?" For your info, the sequel is
actually longer than it's precessor, or at least it looks that way from this
point. No, I really don't see a reason to break it out. I'm not sure how
sending it in a few pieces is any different, aside for more work for Max.
The speed you read it is the speed you read it. I can't control that unless
I send it in in installments, and that's a pain. If it takes you a while,
breaking it up won't change that.

>>Secondly, it's an extremely Jewish story (I got inspired by
>>Philip Roth's works) and I'm actually thinking of submitting it to a
>>magazine or something (it's about 10 pages).
>
>Okay, so maybe it has some things, lets just call those things --
cross-overs stuff.
 
  Crossover? What is it crossing?
>
>>If I do, Chance will not be given a last name
>
>Hmmm, how about consulting us on giving him an alternative last name, after
all, you did get Charon's name from this list. ;)

   Well, I can't really find something close to "Furlong" without sounding
stupid, and why bother? There isn't a need for a last name.

>>and Jake Clawson should become Jake Dawson,
>
>Hmmm... How about "Dawnson"?

   Again--why? I'll just give him a real name like Dawson.

   (side note: I saw some of "Murder in the First" on Saturday. The judge's
name
  was Clawson. Cool, huh?)

>You, write a story, send it to the story site. Me, write a story, throw it
into the trash.

   Oh, never, NEVER throw away work, no matter how much you think it sucks.
You can always learn from it. I have a hole folder of short stories
(non-fanfic) that I HATE.

>
>>Personally, I can't see [Cally] with EITHER of [the SWAT Kats], and screw
their lousy
>>crushes.
>
>Er, who has the crushes?

   Come on, you've seen "The Giant Bacteria." The flirting scene. And the
scene while they're watching TV while she's in the park.


>>As for Chance, I can't see him settling down with anyone
>>without his wild charisma. That's why I paired him with Felina in my
>>stories--they're both gargoyles anyway, what's the difference?
>
>Well, one thing, Clawson and Feral don't mix, period!

   Felina isn't much of a Feral anymore, as you'll see in "Vilthuril"
Whether she likes it or not, she's losing her kat side.


>> Dr. Jake
>
>Hmmm, Dr. Jake (Dr. Jake as in DJ Clawson, that's mean you DJ! :) and
Callie. Now that's an interesting idea, not a good one, but interesting
nonetheless. :)

    Ummmm . . .. excuse me . . . what are you hinting? You ARE aware I'm
female, right?

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>
>

Dr. Jake Clawson
(djclawson_at_garden.net)
(XXRJ13C_at_prodigy.com)
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