I just finished reading over the final chapters of "Bloodlines"
today, and at first when I saw the notice in Chapter 12 about
the ending being "offensive", I started thinking. Do they cuss
or do something else that's really evil? No. Sally and Sandy
just had a very personal talk where they got to know each other
better. Nothing out of what you would expect from the Sonic
Saturday cartoons. They stayed in character, which was not what
I initially expected from the notice.
Personal note to Daniel: Hey, don't worry about the format. IMHO,
it's nothing worse than what I wrote in the "The Temporal Syndrome",
which means: it ain't bad at all. Keep your style of writing; I like it.
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Shawn Wolski, N5UNA
An Indoctrinated Sonic T. Hedgehog Story Author
"But I guess some things are better left in the past."
-Sally, quote from "The Temporal Syndrome"
n5una_at_mail.utexas.edu
and my under construction home page:
http://wwwvms.utexas.edu/~n5una/index.html
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Received on Tue Mar 28 1995 - 11:18:17 PST