Re: Pacas, tenrecs, and pangolins...
On Sat, 11 Mar 1995 BBlaze_at_aol.com wrote:
> I promised you a story, so without further ado, here it is...
[snip]
> "There were a lot of hover units around," the intelligible young fox
> chimed in.
I think you mean 'intelligent'. (:3 But that's a nitpick, as is my
comment that you need to format for a few characters less across (the
ends of some lines wrapped oddly). Mainly I'm looking forward to seeing
more! (:3
---Fred M. Sloniker, stressed undergrad
L. Lazuli R'kamos, FurryMUCKer
lazuli_at_u.washington.edu
It's not the fall that hurts. It's the sudden stop at the end.
Received on Sat Mar 11 1995 - 19:37:33 PST
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